I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka rawe, great work on your book project Epenesa. I love how you had a clear audience in mind. I wonder if for younger children it might help them to have a separate page and picture for each letter of the alphabet? For example you could have a page that says "A is for Amelia" with a picture of her!
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Ka rawe, great work on your book project Epenesa. I love how you had a clear audience in mind. I wonder if for younger children it might help them to have a separate page and picture for each letter of the alphabet? For example you could have a page that says "A is for Amelia" with a picture of her!
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